Monday, November 22, 2010

Dream the dream...

Even before you know, you will be dead,
I just hate him, that’s what I said…
What are these thoughts in my head?
Years gone by, where has life led?

These thoughts are which one cannot avoid,
For everyone has had their bad day..
Was it because you were devoid?
Or is it because wounded memories stay?

Look at him – hate what he has become,
But suddenly a thought made me numb !
Look closer, I said – look what life made you to be,
Within him I see - a hidden part of me…

The anger that I chose has made me the same,
For anger to anger is an unending game…
Will someone hate me the way I hate him?
My lively life has suddenly gone dim… !

Alas! My eyes open with a shock,
My head was spinning as if it had hit a rock..
Thank God were the words that came my way,
I promised to myself I’ll never see that day…

Whenever I’m angry I tend to, now, think,
Do I want to be a part of that chain?
There definitely has to be an unconscious link,
Else why would the memories of my dream remain?

Nothing I have expressed is new to you,
I’m sure you can link something somewhere too..
Subdue the thought; embrace the tide,
The grass is surely greener this side…!

12 comments:

  1. haha.. i'm sure it does not matter but yes.. as of now!

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  2. haha it does not matter just anxious if ur wife or someone special is the reason behind your motivation..
    and if it is hats off to that girl :-)
    what inspires you nyway ?

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  3. well before i answer that - you would need to reveal your identity.. cause with just grapewine.. i don't know who i am talking to :)

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  4. let me tell u i don knw u ..u dn know me .I just browse this site sometimes ..
    asl: age ..u shld not ask a girl her age ,like u shld not ask a guy his salary.. /girl i already told... location- mostly india and yes an indian.



    it's not that hard to tell the source of your inspiration to poetry lovers..is it?

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  5. Haha.. a good way to put it .. firstly not asking asl.. cause this is the worst place to do so..
    Name's can be asked, i'm sure thats not a problem... ?

    Inspiration - well its a mix of the past and present, self and others who are around me and influence my existence! :)

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  6. sorry if i m spamming :( bye

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  7. ok .. happy to know that .

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  8. no worries abt any spam.. else i would not have kept this open to public... thanks for your comments anyways!

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  9. i really dn know u..but i love the variations of your poetry.
    its not easy to bend a logical mind into poetry i have tried so many times :(

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  10. :-) well i write long mails beware

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